Draft 7 Feedback

Second Draft Feedback Sheet

These are the feedback sheets from our class that we pitched to about our first music video draft. There are mix views about what people like throughout the pitch. People liked the positioning of the camera shots in the video, the narrative, performance. lip synching and the band shots. The parts that they want us to develop are we need to learn how to play the guitar, the zooming shot of the mask's eye needs to be improved and our shots are too long and the need to be shortened. 

Blog Feedback

Here is the audio for the blog feedback I was given.

Digipak Presentation Feedback

This is the feedback from my first digipak draft. There are a lot of good points and points that say what my work can be improved on. Some feedback is saying that the pictures were too dark but that was just because of the screen it was being presented on. I will still however decide to change the brightness of my digipak in case it wasn't the screen and it could happen again. Another point that I was given was telling me that I needed to switch around the front cover and the left cover since the left cover looked more professional and what a front cover should look like. I will go on and change the digipak layout around so it makes more sense and can please the audience's feedback. My track listing needs to be developed I will change it so it looks more like a real track list on a digipak. Instead of lyrics on my inside cover it needs to be a lyrics book, which I might remove and add a second disc instead so that it can fulfill my promise of a bonus disc. I also got feedback on my disc saying it needs to be edited, which I will get around to making it link with the rest of my digipak. I will take all of this feedback into consideration and make my second draft a lot better than the first one, so that it can please the audience.

Pitch Feedback

Here is what everyone said about our pitch. Overall I think that our pitch went really well, there were some parts that could be improved on, however most of the feedback agrees that all of the work that we had created over the last month has turned out really good. We will be presenting the pitch again so we will have to use what we was given in here and put it into our actual presentation. Some good feedback was that we had good analysis of the original video and our test shots were looking good. Our logo was praised a lot in the feedback along with the band name and song choice. Some parts that people found confusing was narrative, this might of been because of the animatic. Even though the animatic links well with beat of the song, trying to follow the story is proven quite hard when you watch it. We also forgot to add a Goodwin's analysis of our own music video, so this is another thing that we will do next time.

Song Choice Survey

This is the song choice survey that we decided to go out and take. We went and ask several different people around school to get their opinion on what song we should choose.

Sinead Feedback